Post by Holla-saurus rex on Mar 16, 2009 12:11:16 GMT -5
Alright now, back in the first grade, I wrote a story and well, I realized that I have basically the same writing style as I did way back then.
NOTE: This is word for word how I typed it. I did not fix it at all. This is EXACTLY how it was typed. . .
Chris' Story
Chris is your average person. Has a best friend named Sean, and just finished College
Knock- knock~
Who is it?
Sean!
Oh hey Sean it's open. What's up?? Asked Chris.
'Nada' (clunk) 'oww that hurt! What was that!? Questioned Sean.
The wall you idiot chuckled Chris. How did you hit it?'
Humph anyway! Sneered Sean. Wanna go and get a hamburger?
Sure let's go right now!
Mugger:' Give me you (I mean your) NOW!!'
No Way! Yelled Chris
The Mugger and Chris stared each other down down. Suddenly the mugger pulled out a gun and fired!
Chris dodged just in time, but Sean was in the way and got shot in the right arm and fell to the ground in pain yelling at the top of his lungs.
NO Sean!!' Screamed Chris
I'm all right, Sean moaned.
Then Chris ran after the Mugger. He caught up with him and the two began fighting furiously. Chris hit the mugger in the face with his strongest punch. The mugger fell down, and scrambled to pick up his gun.
Right when he was about to shoot, Chris kicked the gun out of his hand.
The mugger got up and got in a fighting stance and tried to hit Chris but Chris moved and punched the mugger so hard in the temple that the mugger fell flat on his face and did not move. . . (even back then I used the infamous, . . .)
Chris went over to check his pulse
There was none.
He had killed him.
Chris then got down on his knees and cried out aloud.
He never meant to take another man's life.
He was only attacking him by self-defense.
Sean got up slowly and went over to him and put his left arm around him.
It's ok man, there was nothing else you could of done. He had a gun.
Yeah I know!
Are you all right man? Chris Asked Sean.
Yeah,
Man, your (I meant you're) bleeding bad! Let's get you to the hospital said a panicked Chris.
Guess you're right let's go down to the hospital because I'm feeling. . . Oooo (faint)
Not good! Not good, guess I have to carry you there you lazy punk!
17 Days Later. . .
Well what happened to me while I was asleep??
Nothing much, I was told you would wake up soon, so I went to Burger King and got some burgers.
Great I'm starving!
I got you a whopper with double lettuce, and a Bacon Double Cheese Burger for me.
Let's go home.
Are you insane? You just woke up from a coma, and need to rest. You can't even move you arm at all!
I just wanted to stick around to make sure you were gonna be alright.'
They said you'd still have to stay here for another few days. I'll be back to visit you a little later.
Later on that evening. . .
The mugger's friend found out about their friend, and searched for his killer.
Chris was then shot and killed, Sean never saw his friend alive again
So yep, that's what I wrote way back in the day.
NOTE: This is word for word how I typed it. I did not fix it at all. This is EXACTLY how it was typed. . .
Chris' Story
Chris is your average person. Has a best friend named Sean, and just finished College
Knock- knock~
Who is it?
Sean!
Oh hey Sean it's open. What's up?? Asked Chris.
'Nada' (clunk) 'oww that hurt! What was that!? Questioned Sean.
The wall you idiot chuckled Chris. How did you hit it?'
Humph anyway! Sneered Sean. Wanna go and get a hamburger?
Sure let's go right now!
Mugger:' Give me you (I mean your) NOW!!'
No Way! Yelled Chris
The Mugger and Chris stared each other down down. Suddenly the mugger pulled out a gun and fired!
Chris dodged just in time, but Sean was in the way and got shot in the right arm and fell to the ground in pain yelling at the top of his lungs.
NO Sean!!' Screamed Chris
I'm all right, Sean moaned.
Then Chris ran after the Mugger. He caught up with him and the two began fighting furiously. Chris hit the mugger in the face with his strongest punch. The mugger fell down, and scrambled to pick up his gun.
Right when he was about to shoot, Chris kicked the gun out of his hand.
The mugger got up and got in a fighting stance and tried to hit Chris but Chris moved and punched the mugger so hard in the temple that the mugger fell flat on his face and did not move. . . (even back then I used the infamous, . . .)
Chris went over to check his pulse
There was none.
He had killed him.
Chris then got down on his knees and cried out aloud.
He never meant to take another man's life.
He was only attacking him by self-defense.
Sean got up slowly and went over to him and put his left arm around him.
It's ok man, there was nothing else you could of done. He had a gun.
Yeah I know!
Are you all right man? Chris Asked Sean.
Yeah,
Man, your (I meant you're) bleeding bad! Let's get you to the hospital said a panicked Chris.
Guess you're right let's go down to the hospital because I'm feeling. . . Oooo (faint)
Not good! Not good, guess I have to carry you there you lazy punk!
17 Days Later. . .
Well what happened to me while I was asleep??
Nothing much, I was told you would wake up soon, so I went to Burger King and got some burgers.
Great I'm starving!
I got you a whopper with double lettuce, and a Bacon Double Cheese Burger for me.
Let's go home.
Are you insane? You just woke up from a coma, and need to rest. You can't even move you arm at all!
I just wanted to stick around to make sure you were gonna be alright.'
They said you'd still have to stay here for another few days. I'll be back to visit you a little later.
Later on that evening. . .
The mugger's friend found out about their friend, and searched for his killer.
Chris was then shot and killed, Sean never saw his friend alive again
So yep, that's what I wrote way back in the day.
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