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Post by zombiexdave on Apr 23, 2008 7:59:54 GMT -5
this is a little poem i wrote...that's actually more like a story...but whatevvv
The Heart That Once Beat
The night is dark, but on the street, lies the famous, heart that once beat.
It pounded proud, It pounded loud, it was said It could be heard, above a crowd.
But one day it just stopped, without a reason, and it's been that way every season.
It's said it stopped when the fair princess died. It's said it was tragic, and nobody lies.
"The moon rest high, in the dark autumn sky, and who better to tell the story, than I.
The wind was whipping. The stars shown not. Our love in the graveyard, where all bodies rot.
She told me she loved me, I said it right back. She told me she'll leave me, if I'd ever attacked.
What a simple condition. So easy to finish, for I am, the town pacifist.
That night I remember her figure was slender, and she used just the right amount of blush.
She left me at midnight, and I'll tell you what I did find. Her with another man, at one.
I was walking the town, round and about, trying to shake the overwhelming doubt.
I was then inspired, pacifism expired, and I changed into a self-loathing demon.
What came over me was not east to see. Until of course, it was too late.
That cold dark night that I saw her cheating, I ripped out her heart, and It was still beating.
It beat afternoon, and day and night. It would beat in the dark, and beat in the light.
But one day it just stopped, and I'll tell you quick why. The reason it stopped, was because I died."
Fin
i used to write a lot of stuff like this...i'll probably post a couple more later.
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Post by Arkangel™ on Apr 23, 2008 11:36:52 GMT -5
that was interesting..more would be awesome...that was really cool tho..good work =D
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Post by zombiexdave on Apr 23, 2008 14:37:36 GMT -5
haha thanks.
i tend to have a really weird morbid style of writing.
but it really doesn't reflect me...if that makes sense.
i don't think i'm fucked up, haha.
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Post by Arkangel™ on Apr 23, 2008 16:07:14 GMT -5
not at all..most things i dont read all the way *cough*
but it kept me interesting...
when you gonna post up the rest?
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Post by Wesker_fan on Apr 23, 2008 16:22:02 GMT -5
That's really good, Dave.
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Post by zombiexdave on Apr 23, 2008 22:28:10 GMT -5
well i'll get around to it, haha.
i'll work on that tonight.
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